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Tuesday, September 8, 2015

Getting "ahead" in blogging, and labels

When I started writing a monthly newspaper trade column almost 20 years ago, the Internet was relatively new, as was email. There were no blogs, no Facebook, no Instagram, no twitter. Digital cameras were high priced. 

I remember teaching headline writing in classes and for the Oklahoma Press Association.  At the time, I always said the headline was the most important element on a page, because it accomplished four different chores at once. They grab attention, tell the story, rate the news, and help dress up your pages.

Today, there are still headlines, and all of that is still true. 
But while the way we write headlines has changed dramatically with digital type—rather than having to “count” spaces, we just tap a key to reduce or enlarge sizes to fit, they’re more important than ever.

In fact, they accomplish even more. Ever hear of SEO (Search Engine Optimization)?  Of course you have. 
Tell me,  isn’t that what a good headline has always been?
(That's also why you need to put labels after each post...they help your readers search for your ideas, and increase SEO) 

And today, as our attention spans get shorter and shorter thanks to digital media and the explosion of speed delivering news in all media, they’re crucial to attracting impatient, hurried, distracted-by-other-media readers.

I just “read” the New York Times this morning. How? By scanning the headlines on the computer.  Check any other news outlet on line. People scan the headlines and expect to come away with a general sense of what has happened. We’ll go back and read the ones we want more information in later. All the Internet search engines spend lots of money trying to come up with catchy headlines to attract you to their pages, and thus boost ad hits. 
Nothing new, is it, except the media and the speed?

 I’ve found I need to teach my blogging students how to write “headlines” on their blog posts. I took it for granted until I found my blog traffic going up depending on the words in the headlines, and that most of my students had no clue. 
All those old headline practices and tips that I’ve taught, or written about in the past have changed with the digital world. To me, there are only two rules in headline writing these days: 
Be accurate. Don’t be boring.

They are one important key to attracting readers to your posts.

So, here’s a brief how-to checklist on writing  headlines, in any media, especially blogs.

  • What’s the key point of the post?
  • What will most appeal to your readers?
  • Make a list of the strongest, most concrete nouns and verbs
  • Have you chosen words that are trending in search engines?
  • Use action verbs when possible
  • Use short words   
  •  Look for anything unusual 
  •   Is there any play on words you can use to heighten interest?
  • Use the shortest words possible 
  • Use the biggest type you can (for print version)
  • Use consistent legible type (no fancy fonts)
  • Get to the point early
  • More label heads are ok—one or two strong words—with or without a verb (Let a subhead add essential details)
  • Edit—ask yourself if you can write it more briefly
Students: check the headlines on your posts and see how they measure up.
Below, comment on one thing you will improve.
(A version of this article appeared in The Oklahoma Publisher, the statewide newspaper of the Oklahoma Press Assocaition, under "Clark's critique).

9 comments:

  1. What I am going to improve on my blog is shortening the length of my posts, but giving them more depth. I get really bad about making stuff lengthy because I like to "fluff" up my writing (thanks to my English high school teacher). I feel like I can do a better job of getting straight to the point, but still keeping it interesting and witty.

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  2. I am going to work on catchier headlines for my posts. Naming has always been difficult to me and I want to improve my skills at doing so. My posts are forward so I want the title to be forward yet eye catching. I am also going to work on making sure my posts are not too short.

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  3. I am going to work on having headlines that are unique and catchy but also straight to the point.

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  4. I am going to work on having headlines that are unique and catchy but also straight to the point.

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  5. I could strive to have more catchy headlines. I need something that is kinda off beat and catches peoples eye, but at the same time is relevant to the information in the post.

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  6. The thing I am really going to work on is using a lot more labels so people can come across my blog posts easier.

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  7. I am going to work on my headline. There are many situations where I just don't know what to write as a headline. Usually write on sports and those headlines are kind of easy and sometimes obvous, but with this blog its just a challenge being creative enough to come up with y own.

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  8. I am going to work on my headline. There are many situations where I just don't know what to write as a headline. Usually write on sports and those headlines are kind of easy and sometimes obvous, but with this blog its just a challenge being creative enough to come up with y own.

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  9. I think I am going to try to add play on words in my headlines. I always like puns, so I think using them will catch people's eyes and they will want to read on and see what's so "punny."

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